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Using a motif for Paper 1 Question 5
Using a motif is a great way to gain marks for structure and organisation in Paper 1 question 5. This resource contains 4 high grade examples of how to use a motif for Paper 1 Question 5. They are responses to the November 2021 question: write a story about a new beginning.
Example 1: Motif is turquoise candle
Example 2: Motif is a broken pocket watch
Example 3: Motif is a silver key
Example 4: Motif is tulips.
Also contains 3 examples that use an object as a motif in drop, shift, zoom, leave narratives.
This is a great resource for modelling how to use motifs so students can then go on to choose their own object to develop across the text.
Guilt An Inspector Calls Model response
A high grade model response looking at how the theme of guilt is explored in An Inspector Calls.
Eric Birling Model Response
A high grade model response looking at how Priestley uses Eric to communicate his authorial message in An Inspector Calls.
Women in An Inspector Calls
A high grade response looking at how women are presented in An Inspector Calls. Not quite in top band. It requires a little more analysis of dramatic methods (A02) to reach the top band but the A03 is strong.
Lady Macbeth Quotation Quiz
15 multiple choice questions on 15 key Lady Macbeth quotations. Designed to snugly fit on one A4 page. Ideal for testing students’ direct knowledge of this character. Includes the answer sheet on page 2.
An Inspector Calls Quiz
50 multiple choice questions on An Inspector Calls designed to fit snugly onto one A3 sheet. Ideal for testing students’ direct knowledge of the text. Includes the answer sheet on page 2.
Greed Grade 9 Essay - A Christmas Carol
A grade 9 level response looking at the theme of greed in A Christmas Carol.
Also contains 6 revision cards analysing 6 useful quotations for exploring the theme of greed.
Inspector Goole
A character revision sheet analysing 10 key quotations for Inspector Goole. Also includes a thesis style introduction. Ideal for helping guide students on how to produce a high grade response on this character from An Inspector Calls.
Lady Macbeth Quiz
30 question multiple choice quiz on the character of Lady Macbeth. Ideal for testing direct knowledge. Includes the answer sheet.
Also has a 48 question multiple choice quiz on the play as a whole with answer sheet.
Mrs Sybil Birling
Character revision sheet on Sybil Birling which analyses 10 key quotations. Also includes a thesis style introduction. Great revision tool for helping to prepare for writing an essay on this character.
Sheila Birling
Handy revision sheet containing thoughtful comments and ideas about ten key quotations for the character of Sheila Birling in An Inspector Calls. Also includes a thesis style introduction.
AQA Paper 1 Question 2 Moving from Level 3 to Level 4
Many students struggle to get into the top band (level 4) for AQA Paper 1 Question 2. This resource is aimed at helping students move from level 3 to level 4. Students look at and compare level 3 and level 4 sample responses to 6 different Paper 1 Question 2 short extracts. For each, they must attempt to explain in their own words why the level 4 response is better than the level 3 response.
Describe a very hot place Paper 1 Question 5 - 6 responses to compare
6 Paper 1 Question 5 responses all describing a very hot place - a desert island. This is a useful task for departmental moderation or for getting students to engage with the markscheme to gain a greater appreciation of the style of writing required for the upper bands.
Mitch 3 full length exam responses to compare Band 3, Band 4, Band 5 A Streetcar Named Desire
This resource contains 3 different responses to the following question:
‘Mitch is presented as a one-dimensional character who contributes little to the tragic impact of the play’.
There is a band 3 response, a band 4 response and a band 5 response. This is useful for helping students to clearly see the difference between the attainment bands on the mark scheme.
Also contains a revision sheet on Mitch’s character.
How does Shakespeare present Macbeth as a male character who changes? Timeline and exemplars. 2023
A timeline focusing on how the character of Macbeth changes during the play. There is also a question template to help students explore their own interpretations of the different stages of Macbeth’s descent into evil.
Also includes 2 exemplar high grade exemplars to the question for students to compare and consider which are the most perceptive in meeting the criteria for level 6/grade 9.
Also includes 12 character flashcards to help trace how the different aspects of Macbeth’s complex personality are communicated in the play.
Animal Farm - Tracing characters and themes
2 page Animal Farm revision worksheet.
Page 1 has 3 key quotations for each of the main characters and themes which have been carefully selected from roughly the start, the middle and end of the novella for students to comment on and analyse to help them show knowledge of the whole text.
On page 2 there is then a writing frame to guide students on how to write these plans up as 3 paragraph responses covering the whole text.
This resource has been successful at supporting students looking to achieve grades 4-6.
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Macbeth Model responses
A range of high grade responses on Macbeth. All responses aim to be critical and convincing with judicious use of references and perceptive analysis of methods aligned closely with authorial motives.
How to write grade 9 topic sentences in English literature exam responses
A detailed lesson, inspired by teaching tip 3 on the recent AQA 2022 examiner report, that guides students on how to write grade 9 topic sentences for a range of literature texts.
There are multiple examples for A Christmas Carol, Macbeth, Lord of the Flies and Power and Conflict that all follow the same structure.
At each stage of the lesson, students use the models to try and generate their own topic sentences for each studied text.
Power and Conflict: Revision of Big Ideas
PowerPoint with click-animated text which goes through 4 big ideas in the collection concerning the power of nature, conflict over identity, abuse of power and the power of memories. For each big idea, I go through key quotations from specific poems with detailed analysis written in short form to assist with note-taking. Students then move on to try using big ideas to help plan responses to 3 exam-style questions.
My most comprehensive resource on Power and Conflict poetry is available here with revision posters on every poem:
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/power-and-conflict-revision-sheets-12884928
Kingship in Macbeth.
Perhaps due to the recent coronation, many experts are predicted kingship would be the theme for the exam in 2023. They were wrong. Maybe 2024 will be the year for this key theme to be on the exam. Therefore I have created a 20 slide PowerPoint that guides students through how to plan and respond to a question on kingship in Macbeth. Students go on to write their own response and then compare it to the model response.
I believe the model response is full marks and would easily achieve grade 9; however, there will always be some teachers who claim nothing short of postgraduate level writing will receive the much coveted 9 so I am reluctant to make the claim that it would definitely achieve a 9.